Monday, November 13, 2017

Creative Piece Of Writing

Two  weeks  ago in  Te Ngahere we were  learning  to use the correct structure for a creative piece of writing. The language features I was using were alliteration, metaphors and onomatopoeia. The theme of the writing was about reducing, reusing and recycling.  I think I did well on using my metaphors and I think I need to work on my alliteration.   

Language features: Alliteration, Metaphors and onomatopoeia  

Let’s stop littering
Our sea creatures will soon die
It is polluting     

Acrostic poem  

Polluting is bad
Our sea creatures could  die
Let's stop littering
Lets stop now  
Unless you want to make our country look ugly
This can cause diseases
It can cause tourist to stop coming to our country  
Our environment will look ugly
Now is your chance to stop….

There's rubbish on our land fill  
The rubbish will literally kill  
Our sea creatures will soon die
The rubbish on the beach will fly

Onomatopoeia poetry
Swoosh, Swoosh, Swoosh
The sound of plastic wrap flying
Woosh, Woosh

Poems with a twist  
People picking up rubbish
sea animals saved  
People using heaps of energy  
Sea animals die

Dying animals
Lots of rubbish  
People caring for animals
People caring for our country

Metaphoric poetry
It is sad
It is a polluter
It is a killer of sea life  
It is ongoing
It is  invincible

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